dabble in writing-
dot eyes, curve seas. connect tease.
ink blot therapy.
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September 16, 2009
haiku #11
Posted by calliopespen under poetry | Tags: haiku, poem, poetry, Rorschach, writing |[32] Comments
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September 16, 2009 at 10:07 am
Wow. That was really cool. I love this one, Danielle; great job. Left me all haiku-y inside.
September 16, 2009 at 10:15 am
Haiku-y is good! 🙂
September 16, 2009 at 10:11 am
This is so cool – I see a love story in miniature!
September 16, 2009 at 10:15 am
That doesn’t surprise me J:) Thank you.
September 16, 2009 at 12:28 pm
Wow, first time I have gotten to visit your page, your work is really amazing! Been a long time since I’ve read a good haiku too! I like it a lot! 🙂
September 16, 2009 at 5:20 pm
Hi Elizabeth! I’m so glad you poked your head in 🙂 Thank you so much. Come back anytime..we’re a fun crowd:)
September 16, 2009 at 1:08 pm
that is a beautiful haiku
September 16, 2009 at 5:20 pm
Why thank you, Flow. 🙂
September 16, 2009 at 1:50 pm
Connect tease – that’s awesome! What a great line! And what a great haiku. 🙂
September 16, 2009 at 5:23 pm
Oh Falc, glad you enjoyed that one. I have to admit I was laughing when I wrote this. Like I told Darc, I’m in a goofball mood today 😉
September 16, 2009 at 3:52 pm
what fun this onethis one
coming freshness
like a breeze – you so good with these – smiles
September 16, 2009 at 5:24 pm
Thank you Jpen. Happy you came today. Also so happy I had the chance to read your amazing poetry before my day got too hectic. It helped to ground me.
September 16, 2009 at 6:38 pm
That was such a skillfully playful way to sum up a writer’s daily grind. 🙂 Exquisite.
September 16, 2009 at 7:40 pm
Love that you could relate, Val. Somehow, I knew you could 😉 Thank you.
September 16, 2009 at 6:50 pm
Very interesting. Not sure how I feel about free Haiku but I definitely love this piece.
September 16, 2009 at 7:39 pm
Thank you, IS! Glad to see you here, and glad you like it! 🙂
September 16, 2009 at 9:43 pm
How delciously wonderful.
September 16, 2009 at 10:04 pm
Thank you Sara 🙂
September 16, 2009 at 10:08 pm
What a fun piece, Danielle!
September 16, 2009 at 10:14 pm
Thanks Susan! I’m glad it had the desired effect 🙂
September 17, 2009 at 4:19 pm
Love your word play(fullness)
And I meant to tell you earlier your pic is awesome.
September 17, 2009 at 7:12 pm
Thank you, Bonnie! Glad you like them both:)
September 17, 2009 at 7:18 pm
This really made me smile, Danielle. Great Haiku.
September 17, 2009 at 7:24 pm
And that makes me smile, too, Paul! Thank you! 🙂
September 18, 2009 at 2:45 am
Clever and rhythmic and all good things!!
September 18, 2009 at 10:42 pm
🙂 Thanks, Azfree. Makes me happy that you like it!
September 18, 2009 at 9:18 am
How very very clever ! Enjoyed immensely. Thank you,
Colleen
September 18, 2009 at 10:41 pm
Thank you Colleen! Glad it made you smile 🙂
September 18, 2009 at 11:07 pm
what a fun haiku! loved it!!
September 18, 2009 at 11:08 pm
Thank you Shraddha.! 🙂
September 19, 2009 at 4:59 am
The last sentence is excelent! ink blog therapy, I want to try it, I have a hunch I will get better for sure with it.
Bye Cali
September 21, 2009 at 8:29 am
Thanks Mariana! Practice makes perfect, that’s for sure 😉